Jab wo saamne aati hain,
Duniya tham si jaati hai,
Sirf unhe hi dekhta rehta hun,
Aankhein jam si jaati hain.
Chehre pe unke ek udasi hai,
Kyun unka mann yun bhari hai,
Kahi kuchh to galat hai,
Jo aankhon mein unke paani hai.
Koshish chahe jitni karun,
Unse baat na kar pata hun,
Kya unko main bolun,
Ye baat na samajh aati hai.
Par aaj unke chehre ko,
Maine pehli baar khilkhilate dekha,
Aankhon mein unke chamak dekhi,
Honton pe badi si muskan dekhi.
Hum unhe jaante nahi,
Par pata nahi kyun,
Unko haste dekha to,
Khud ko bhi humne haste dekha.
2 comments:
Will try to give my genuie comments ( I am generally honest at 2am )
nice, upto 2 paras
but from third para, it is not sounding good.
I think, u should ask her whats the problem so that it can be rectified in the later paras
:)
Ab yeh bhi bata do yeh hain kaun? ;)
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